> We would take a PR for the first example if folks think that's better spacing. ... we'd take a PR on anything that is equivalent.
"We'd take a PR" is a great line for someone who's already sold on the concept, but it's not super helpful for flaws in your marketing. Reading OP, it doesn't sound like they trust you enough to find it to be worth their time fixing your examples for you.
Though I'm not sure how to find consensus on what is the best representation of SQL without asking folks to make a reviewable suggestion.
I had thought the examples are currently in their clearest state — I definitely don't think it's obvious that removing line-breaks makes it look clearer (which is the full extent of the feedback IIUC...)
"We'd take a PR" is a great line for someone who's already sold on the concept, but it's not super helpful for flaws in your marketing. Reading OP, it doesn't sound like they trust you enough to find it to be worth their time fixing your examples for you.